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Wild Lion*esses Pride by Jay's avatar

This opening chapter is gripping! Maggie's urgency, frustration, and determination leap off the page. The dialogue feels raw and real—especially her exchange with Alicia, which captures the exhaustion and resistance many feel when faced with another battle in a lifetime of them. And that ending? “Book Club.” What a perfect way to signal the beginning of something big while keeping the reader hungry for more.

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Sarah Miller's avatar

Love how this starts right in the meat of action and purpose. Reflection and engagement immediately triggered

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